tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post7736155707695331350..comments2024-03-29T09:17:03.691+02:00Comments on Thoughts from Botswana by Lauri Kubuitsile: Moon LoveLaurihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11112458658109887868noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post-67412798497041372010-09-04T08:00:17.916+02:002010-09-04T08:00:17.916+02:00If you want to look ed hardy clothes and feel sexy...If you want to look <a href="http://www.classicedhardy.com/" rel="nofollow">ed hardy clothes</a> and feel sexy, a <a href="http://www.classicedhardy.com/christian-audigier" rel="nofollow">Christian audigier</a> maternity cocktail <a href="http://www.classicedhardy.com/ed-hardy-mens/men-shoes" rel="nofollow">ed hardy shoes</a> dress may be the <a href="http://www.classicedhardy.com/" rel="nofollow">ed hardy outlet</a> fashion choice. 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Thanks Miss Karen.Laurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112458658109887868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post-10209936048447244742008-10-12T01:37:00.000+02:002008-10-12T01:37:00.000+02:00I really liked the blunt straightforwardness of th...I really liked the blunt straightforwardness of this piece. "...tossed aside as waste in that odd deceitful storybook-lying world of love." Great line - really fresh take on what is usually a tired topic - nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post-15086776613966563712008-10-11T19:15:00.000+02:002008-10-11T19:15:00.000+02:00I don't know why, but this story has me thinking o...I don't know why, but this story has me thinking of a rich dessert, creamy, but not fancy.<BR/><BR/>Like the love in the story, it isn't frills and sugar-coating, it's the real stuff, that which satisfies both the hunger and the desire.<BR/><BR/>Excellent piece. It's so amazing when we get a story that just comes together so well, AND so fast.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15769610505748900163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post-27641936493235998482008-10-09T14:51:00.000+02:002008-10-09T14:51:00.000+02:00Thanks Anthony.Thanks Anthony.Laurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112458658109887868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post-4942135344808275402008-10-09T11:46:00.000+02:002008-10-09T11:46:00.000+02:00Yes, this is very dreamy in nature. Excellent.Yes, this is very dreamy in nature. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post-37911566367512161652008-10-09T06:00:00.000+02:002008-10-09T06:00:00.000+02:00I think maybe it was a dream, actually. David, tha...I think maybe it was a dream, actually. <BR/>David, thanks for your advice. I'm seeing how to use these SEF stories. 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Perhaps a dream... perhaps something more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post-58050186346353821882008-10-08T15:23:00.000+02:002008-10-08T15:23:00.000+02:00Selma, I woke up this morning and wrote this story...Selma, I woke up this morning and wrote this story in about 15 mins. It was just in my head. I had intended to write about a moon ladder saving someone in a terrible situation- I might still. I like the idea of that moon ladder of yours. <BR/><BR/>This day started just like that and has been a crazy wild cosmic one and it is not yet 3:30 pm. Eiyeeeeee!!!!! God what a huge, massive, gargantuan difference a day makes. Don't sqaunder a single one folks!Laurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112458658109887868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9052453698252224336.post-52420897224076056752008-10-08T14:56:00.000+02:002008-10-08T14:56:00.000+02:00I really like how you celebrate the nature of the ...I really like how you celebrate the nature of the everyday person through your characters, as well as the way life can be full of the unexpected. In this story I particularly like how the characters have encountered disappointment in their lives yet they are willing to stand up and be as brave as they have to when it comes to love. Another excellent piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com